I’ve been thinking of writing some erotic stories.. And I have no confidence in my writing ability what so ever ^_^; I have gotten the beginning of a short story done.. And I suppose i’ll post it up here for review..
So, tell me what you think 
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By The Water (WIP)
As night fell upon Ashenvale, a light wind picked up, blowing the fallen leafs across the orc hunter’s path. He stopped, lifting his nose to the wind in mirror image to the reddish brown wolf at his side. Grinning, he looked down at his companion, “The wind is in our favor. Come on.” He moved silently through the trees, his furry companion at his heel.
They followed the scent on the wind to a small lake, where they spied an elegant white cat drinking from it’s waters. Notching an arrow, the orc motioned his pet to circle round the cat. “She’ll make a beauty of a trophy..”, he thought as he let the arrow loose.
The large white cat screamed in pain as the arrow found it’s mark in her left shoulder, the scream turned to challenge as the wolf leapt from the deep shadows to clamp his jaws on the cat’s right flank. Twisting, the cat slashed at the wolf’s muzzle, razor claws leaving bloody lines and forcing a yelp of pain and anger from the wolf.
The orc stepped from the cover of the trees, firing another arrow, he snarled as the cat dodged his attack. Notching another arrow, he moved round the cat to keep her with the water to her back, and he and the wolf between her and freedom. The fight continued on, the orc and his pet slowly weakening the cat til she was panting with exhaustion. Stepping forward in triumph, the orc sprang back in startled shock as the cat shimmered and stood tall to reveal a battered night elf. She was marked as the cat had been, gouges and slashes bleeding, her clothing ripped. She glared defiantly at the orc and began casting a spell. As the orc watched, the wounds began to close and heal before his eyes. This allowed for him to see just how shredded her clothing was. Her large breasts were bare to the world, most of her legs as well, all that were left of the robe she had been wearing were remnants on her arms, waist, and down her left leg. She had long white hair, some sort of leaf or flower markings around her eyes, and pale lavender skin. Though he preferred the women of his own people, he felt his cock stiffen as he took in the sight of the mostly naked druid woman before him.
Still wanting her for a trophy, though in a different sense now, he charged at the elven woman with a feral growl, tackling her to the ground. He pinned her by her wrists, and grinned down into her face in triumph. She bared her teeth and attempted to cast some spell, he released one of her wrists to backhand her across the face, dazing her.
“None of that now..”, he said in orcish. He ripped a length of bloodied cloth from the remnants of her clothing, and bound her hands behind her back.
While she was still dazed, he easily carried her to a nearby fallen tree and bent her over it, her ass bare to the world. He spread her legs apart and knelt between them, grinning as she began to come out of her dazed state with some light moans. He reached a hand down and stroked the outer lips of her pussy, causing the elf to gasp and tremble as she finally realized her situation.
“Release me you vile creature!” she screamed at him in darnassian, kicking and thrashing upon the fallen tree. In response, he slapped her sharply across the rear, drawing a yelp of pain from her.
“Quiet.” he growled in orcish, doubting she’d understand him anyways.
He stroked her again, a finger dipping in to rub against her clit and inner lips. His grin widened as her pleas became gasps.
“You like that, don’t you? You little whore. Your men don’t measure up to me in any sense.” he murmured this last bit more to himself then to her. He bent over her to growl into her ear, “I’m going to fuck you til you beg for more.”.
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And that’s what I have so far.. I’ve read far better on Darknest.. And I really don’t know if my writing is even remotely good enough for me to finish this.. Though I know how the whole thing goes.. I just tend to find it hard to put it into words.. And I feel i’m over using how I start my sentences.. ‘He did this’ and ‘He did that’, and then another sentence starting with ‘He’ -.-
